DEAD RECKONING
An Original Mystery Series
Drawing from the world-building of “The Hurt Locker,” “Combat” (1962), and the visceral cinema of Spielberg and Bigelow
COLD OPEN
FADE IN:
EXT. KANDAHAR PROVINCE, AFGHANISTAN — DAWN — 2009
Extreme close-up. A human eye, open. Staring at nothing.
Pull back slowly. The eye belongs to a man face-down in pale dust. Blood-stained fabric — torn from a uniform — is wrapped crudely around his head. His fingers are splayed, reaching toward something just out of frame.
The only sound: wind. Then, distant, a single gunshot.
TITLE CARD: “KANDAHAR PROVINCE — FORWARD OPERATING BASE ECHO — APRIL 14, 2009”
INT. FOB ECHO — TACTICAL OPERATIONS CENTER — CONTINUOUS
Fluorescent light. Humming computers. Maps pinned with colored pins like a disease spreading across a body.
SERGEANT FIRST CLASS NORA VOSS (38, compact, watchful — the kind of woman who learned to be still so men wouldn’t notice her noticing things) stands over a satellite image printout. She traces a road with her finger. Stops.
Her finger rests on a black smudge.
VOSS (to herself) That wasn’t there yesterday.
She picks up the printout. Holds it to the light.
VOSS (CONT’D) (louder) Hey. Kowalski.
SPECIALIST DANNY KOWALSKI (24, lanky, perpetually chewing something — gum, a pen cap, the inside of his cheek) rolls his chair over without looking up from his laptop.
KOWALSKI Sarge.
VOSS When did we get this imagery?
KOWALSKI (glancing) 0300 feed. Why?
VOSS Route Amber. This shadow here. What does that look like to you?
Kowalski squints. Tilts his head. Squints harder.
KOWALSKI A car?
VOSS A burned car. Passenger door open.
KOWALSKI So somebody broke down —
VOSS Nobody breaks down on Route Amber at 0300, Kowalski. Nobody drives Route Amber at 0300.
Beat.
KOWALSKI Except us.
They look at each other.
Voss is already reaching for the radio.
EXT. ROUTE AMBER — DAWN — MINUTES LATER
A Humvee rolls to a stop. Dust billows around it like a held breath releasing.
Voss steps out. Her hand rests on her sidearm — not drawing, just touching. The way you touch a lucky charm.
The burned car sits thirty meters off the road. A white Toyota. Or it was white.
Beside it, half-obscured by a drainage culvert: a body.
Voss walks toward it. Kowalski flanks left, rifle up.
She crouches beside the body. Male. American. Civilian clothes — khakis, a blue button-down now soaked to burgundy. No ID visible. No dog tags. His hands are bound behind him with zip ties.
But here’s the thing.
She leans closer.
One of the zip ties has been cut. Not broken. Cut. From the inside.
And his right hand — the free hand — is clutching something.
She pries the fingers open carefully, almost tenderly.
A folded piece of paper. Handwritten. Three words:
“THEY WERE OURS.”
Voss stares at it. The wind tries to take it. She closes her fist.
VOSS (quietly, to no one) Who were?
SMASH CUT TO:
TITLE CARD — MASSIVE, BLOOD-RED:
DEAD RECKONING
HOLD ON BLACK.
ACT ONE
TITLE CARD: “FOURTEEN MONTHS LATER — CHICAGO, ILLINOIS”
EXT. CHICAGO — WACKER DRIVE — MORNING
The city asserts itself. Traffic. Steel and glass catching September light. A food cart vendor arguing with a cab driver in two languages simultaneously.
A woman walks against the flow of pedestrian traffic. This is VOSS — but different. Civilian clothes that sit on her like a costume. Hair down. She moves through the crowd the way a soldier moves through a crowd: cataloguing exits, noting hands, reading posture.
She’s carrying a cardboard box. The kind you carry out of an office.
INT. FEDERAL BUILDING — ELEVATOR — CONTINUOUS
Voss rides up alone. Checks her reflection in the polished doors. Straightens her jacket. Looks at the box.
Looks at her own face.
Looks back at the box.
The doors open.
INT. FEDERAL BUILDING — OFFICE OF INSPECTOR GENERAL — CONTINUOUS
A waiting room with the aesthetic soul of a DMV. Motivational posters so generic they achieve a kind of poetry.
Behind a reception desk: AGENT MARCUS COLE (45, Black, built like a question mark — always leaning slightly forward, like he’s about to ask something). He’s reading a file and eating a sandwich and doing both badly.
He looks up. Clocks Voss. Clocks the box.
COLE You’re the Army investigator.
VOSS Former Army investigator. Voss. Nora Voss.
COLE Marcus Cole. OIG. You want coffee? We have coffee. I won’t recommend it.
VOSS I’m fine.
COLE (gesturing at the box) What’s in the box?
VOSS Fourteen months of being told to stop.
Cole sets down his sandwich. His full attention arrives, and it’s a considerable thing.
COLE The Kandahar thing.
VOSS You read the file.
COLE I read the file they gave me. Which I’m guessing isn’t the whole file.
VOSS It’s about a third of the file.
Cole stands. Extends his hand.
COLE Then we have a lot to talk about, Sergeant Voss.
VOSS It’s just Voss now.
She shakes it.
INT. FEDERAL BUILDING — CONFERENCE ROOM — LATER
Documents spread across a table like a battle map. Cole stands at a whiteboard. Voss sits, watching him process.
On the whiteboard: a name. RAYMOND PRUETT.
COLE Raymond Pruett. Forty-one. Former Defense Intelligence Agency analyst. Officially: killed by insurgents on Route Amber, April 14, 2009. Ruled a hostile act. Case closed, filed, buried.
VOSS His hands were zip-tied.
COLE Insurgents take prisoners —
VOSS One tie was cut. From inside. He freed one hand before he died. And the note —
COLE “They were ours.” Which could mean anything.
VOSS Which is what my commanding officer said. Three times. Very calmly.
Beat.
COLE What do you think it means?
VOSS I think Raymond Pruett found out that something — some operation, some asset, some thing — that was being run out of FOB Echo was not what it was supposed to be. I think he tried to get that information out. And I think someone made sure he didn’t.
COLE Someone on our side.
VOSS (flat) Yes.
Long silence. Cole taps the whiteboard.
COLE You said you were told to stop. Who told you?
Voss opens the box. Removes a single document. Slides it across the table.
Cole reads it. His expression doesn’t change, but something behind his eyes does.
COLE (CONT’D) This is signed by a Deputy Assistant Secretary of Defense.
VOSS Mm.
COLE That’s not someone you tell to go to hell.
VOSS No. But it’s someone you go around.
She meets his eyes.
VOSS (CONT’D) Which is why I’m here.
INT. FEDERAL BUILDING — HALLWAY — LATER
Cole walks Voss toward the elevator. A third person falls into step beside them — AGENT PRIYA ANAND (32, South Asian, dressed like she’s on her way to a board meeting, speaks in complete sentences at all times, the most organized person in any room she enters).
ANAND You’re the Voss file.
VOSS I’m a person.
ANAND Priya Anand. I’ve been assigned to Cole’s unit for six weeks, which means I’ve been reading about you for six weeks. You were at FOB Echo for seven months. You ran fourteen separate requests for a formal investigation into Pruett’s death. You were denied fourteen times. You kept copies of everything.
VOSS I grew up in a family where you kept copies of everything.
ANAND Smart family.
COLE (to Anand) What do you have?
ANAND Pruett had a contact. Someone he was communicating with stateside in the weeks before his death. Encrypted messages through a civilian server. We cracked the encryption this morning.
She hands Cole a printout.
Cole reads. His jaw tightens.
ANAND (CONT’D) The contact’s name is Thomas Hale. He was Pruett’s handler at DIA from 2004 to 2007.
COLE Was.
ANAND Thomas Hale died in a car accident. Eight months ago. Two weeks after Voss’s investigation was formally shut down.
Beat.
VOSS (quietly) Show me the accident report.
ANAND That’s the other thing.
She pulls out a second sheet.
ANAND (CONT’D) There isn’t one. Thomas Hale’s death is in the system. But the accident report, the incident report, the responding officer’s notes — everything that would have been generated by the event of his death — none of it exists.
The three of them stand in the hallway.
The elevator doors open.
Nobody gets in.
COLE (to Voss) You still want that coffee?
VOSS I’ll take it.
END OF ACT ONE.
ACT TWO
INT. FEDERAL BUILDING — BREAK ROOM — DAY
The coffee is as bad as promised. Voss drinks it without flinching, which tells you something.
Cole’s phone buzzes. He looks at it. Shows it to Anand.
COLE Address just came in. Pruett’s sister. She’s been trying to reach the DoD about her brother’s personal effects for fourteen months. Nobody returned her calls.
VOSS What kind of personal effects?
COLE A storage unit he rented. Six months before he deployed.
Voss sets down the coffee.
VOSS He rented a storage unit before he deployed.
COLE Outside Rockford.
VOSS He knew. He knew before he went over there, he knew something was wrong, and he —
COLE Made a dead drop in Illinois.
Beat.
ANAND We should go to Rockford.
EXT. ROCKFORD, ILLINOIS — STORAGE FACILITY — DAY
Flat Midwestern sky. A storage facility that looks like every storage facility: orange doors, cracked asphalt, a bored attendant who’s seen nothing and everything.
Voss, Cole, and Anand stand before UNIT 114.
Beside them: CAROL PRUETT (50s, Raymond’s sister — exhausted in a specific way that suggests months of institutional stonewalling, wearing her brother’s face in softer form).
CAROL I don’t know what’s in there. He called me before he left. Said if anything happened to him, don’t let anyone take this. Don’t let anyone in without proper authorization.
COLE What did you think he meant?
CAROL I thought he was being dramatic. Ray was always — (voice catches) He was always careful. He called it “operational thinking.” His wife called it paranoia. They divorced over it, actually.
She unlocks the unit. Rolls it up.
They look inside.
It’s not dramatic. No filing cabinets full of smoking guns. It’s a single plastic tote. And inside the tote: notebooks. Twelve of them. Identical black composition notebooks, the kind you buy at a drugstore.
Voss picks one up. Opens it.
Her face changes.
VOSS These are logs. Operational logs. Going back to — (flipping) 2006.
ANAND (picking up another) They’re not in standard format.
VOSS No. He wrote them like… like a diary almost. Names, dates, locations — but also —
She reads. Something hardens in her expression.
VOSS (CONT’D) Also what he thought about what he was seeing.
COLE (reading over her shoulder) “CODEWORD: LONG WAY HOME.”
Everyone stops.
VOSS What did you say?
COLE (pointing) Here. He uses this phrase. “Long Way Home.” Underlined. Three times in this notebook alone.
Voss takes the notebook from him. Stares at it.
CAROL Do you know what that means?
VOSS (slowly) When I was at FOB Echo. There was a — there was a program. Off the books. Technically it didn’t exist, which means nobody would tell me anything about it. But I heard the name. Once. From a captain who’d had too much to drink and too long a tour.
ANAND What’s the program?
VOSS He called it the Long Way Home. Said it was a routing operation. Moving assets — people — through civilian channels. Off the official manifest. So there’d be no record.
COLE Moving them where?
VOSS That’s what I never found out.
Beat.
CAROL (quietly) My brother was a good man, Mr. Cole. He believed in what he was doing. Whatever he found out — whatever scared him enough to do all of this —
She gestures at the tote.
CAROL (CONT’D) It scared him enough to rent a storage unit and not tell his wife. He told me. Because I was the one person he knew would just… wait. Without asking questions.
Her voice breaks on the last word.
CAROL (CONT’D) I waited fourteen months.
INT. COLE’S CAR — MOVING — DAY
Cole drives. Anand navigates. Voss sits in the back with three of the notebooks open across her lap, reading with the focused efficiency of someone who has done this in moving vehicles before.
ANAND I’m cross-referencing the names he lists in the first notebook against DIA personnel records.
COLE And?
ANAND Most of them check out. Current or former DIA, DoD, State Department contractors. But there are four names I can’t find anywhere. No service record, no clearance record, no employment record. It’s like they don’t exist.
COLE Or like they were scrubbed.
ANAND Or like they were never real names to begin with.
Voss looks up from the notebooks.
VOSS There’s a name in here. He circles it. Multiple times. In the last notebook — which is dated three weeks before he died.
She holds up the notebook. The name is circled in red ink:
HARKER.
COLE Just Harker? No first name?
VOSS Just Harker. And next to it, he’s written one word.
She tilts the page toward Cole. He glances in the rearview mirror.
COLE (reading) “Alive.”
A beat of silence in the moving car.
ANAND Alive meaning —
VOSS Meaning whoever Harker is, Pruett thought they were dead. And then found out they weren’t.
Cole’s phone rings. Hands-free. He answers.
COLE Cole.
VOICE (V.O.) (filtered, tense) Agent Cole. This is Assistant Director Farris. We need you back in Chicago. Now.
COLE Sir, we’re in the middle of —
FARRIS (V.O.) Now, Marcus. And bring the Voss woman.
Click.
The three of them exchange a look.
VOSS “The Voss woman.”
COLE He’s old-fashioned.
VOSS Or he knows who I am.
COLE (quietly) Those aren’t mutually exclusive.
INT. FEDERAL BUILDING — FARRIS’S OFFICE — LATE AFTERNOON
ASSISTANT DIRECTOR WARREN FARRIS (60, silver-haired, the kind of man who was handsome once and knows it, wearing his authority like a well-tailored suit) stands at his window, back to them.
Cole, Anand, and Voss sit.
The notebooks are in Voss’s bag.
FARRIS (without turning) How much do you know about Operation Long Way Home?
Beat.
VOSS Less than we did an hour ago. More than we did this morning.
Farris turns. Studies her.
FARRIS Raymond Pruett was a good analyst. One of the best. He was also, unfortunately, someone who could not leave well enough alone.
COLE Sir —
FARRIS Long Way Home was a legitimate intelligence operation. Classified at the highest level. It ran from 2006 to 2008 and it involved the exfiltration of human intelligence assets out of three active combat theaters.
ANAND Exfiltration to where?
FARRIS That’s classified.
VOSS With respect, sir, you just told us it was legitimate. If it was legitimate, why was Raymond Pruett murdered on a dirt road outside Kandahar?
Farris looks at her for a long moment.
FARRIS Who said he was murdered?
VOSS The zip ties. The cut zip tie. The note in his hand.
FARRIS The official determination was —
VOSS I know what the official determination was. I was there. I saw his hands.
Silence.
Farris sits down. He suddenly looks older.
FARRIS Long Way Home was legitimate when it started. By 2008, elements of it had been… co-opted. People inside the operation were using the routing infrastructure for other purposes.
COLE What purposes?
FARRIS (carefully) Moving things that weren’t people.
The temperature in the room drops several degrees.
ANAND What kinds of things?
FARRIS That is genuinely all I can tell you right now. I want you to understand — I am not stonewalling you. I am protecting an ongoing investigation. One that has been running for eight months.
VOSS Eight months. Since Thomas Hale died.
Farris looks at her sharply.
FARRIS Where did you —
VOSS Hale was Pruett’s contact. Pruett told him what he found. Hale died in a car accident with no paperwork. Your investigation started right after.
Farris is very still.
FARRIS (quietly) Thomas Hale was my asset.
The unexpected twist lands like a mortar round.
FARRIS (CONT’D) He came to me. Before the accident. He gave me a name. One name. The person inside Long Way Home who turned it into something else.
Cole leans forward.
COLE What name?
Farris opens his desk drawer. Removes a single photograph. Slides it across the desk face-down.
Voss reaches out. Turns it over.
She stares at it.
Her face does something complicated.
COLE (CONT’D) (reading her) Voss. Who is that?
VOSS (barely audible) His name is Harker.
Beat.
VOSS (CONT’D) And he was my commanding officer at FOB Echo.
She looks up.
VOSS (CONT’D) He died in an IED strike six weeks before I found Pruett’s body. I wrote the incident report myself.
She sets the photograph down.
VOSS (CONT’D) Except this photo is dated three months ago.
END OF ACT TWO.
TAG
INT. UNKNOWN LOCATION — NIGHT
No establishing shot. We don’t know where this is.
A man sits at a table. We see him from behind — broad shoulders, military posture, a scar on the back of his neck in the shape of something almost deliberate.
He’s looking at a photograph.
The photograph is of Voss.
A SECOND PERSON enters the frame from the left. We see only a hand, placing a burner phone on the table.
SECOND PERSON (O.S.) She went to the OIG.
The man — HARKER — doesn’t move.
HARKER I know.
SECOND PERSON (O.S.) She has the notebooks.
HARKER I know that too.
Beat.
SECOND PERSON (O.S.) What do you want to do?
Harker picks up the burner phone. Looks at it.
Then he puts it in his pocket.
HARKER She’s good. She’s very good.
(beat)
She’ll find the rest of it before we can stop her.
SECOND PERSON (O.S.) So we stop her.
HARKER (standing — we still don’t see his face) No.
(beat)
We let her find it.
He walks out of frame.
The photograph of Voss remains on the table.
The camera holds on it.
FADE TO BLACK.
TITLE CARD:
“DEAD RECKONING — NEXT WEEK:”
Flash cut: Voss opening a notebook to a page she hasn’t read yet. Her face going white.
Flash cut: Cole on a phone. “They’re not moving people. They never were.”
Flash cut: Anand, alone in the conference room at night, staring at a map with colored pins. The pins form a pattern. She steps back to see it.
Flash cut: A door. Voss’s door. Someone has slid something under it.
Voss picks it up.
It’s a composition notebook. Black cover.
Number thirteen.
SMASH TO BLACK.
DEAD RECKONING
Created by [Author]
END OF PILOT
SERIES BIBLE NOTE:
DEAD RECKONING is a mystery procedural built on a war film’s bones — the moral ambiguity of The Hurt Locker, the episodic patrol structure of Combat (1962), the Spielbergian principle that the most terrifying thing is not the monster but the institution that enabled it. Each episode follows one thread of the Long Way Home conspiracy, while the larger architecture — what was really being moved, who authorized it, and whether Harker is hunter or hunted — unfolds across a planned three-season arc. The trap was set. The question is who set it for whom.
FADE OUT.
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Content type: pilot
Topic: Mystery|war_film
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